Email: Offer to purchase product

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You recently visited a business tech trade fair and are very interested SimpleTalk, a product that simplifies business answering systems. You would like to purchase a SimpleTalk system for all four branches of your company.

Write an email to the vendor requesting information and setting up a time to talk further.

Examples and hints

EMAIL STRUCTURE FOR PROFESSIONAL EMAIL TO SOMEONE YOU DON'T KNOW

Short paragraphs are used, and in each of them the writer performs a different function:

1st paragraph: referring to previous contact and stating the reason for writing.
2nd paragraph: Giving details of the particular area of interest and requesting further information.
3rd paragraph: Providing an incentive to the recipient.
4th paragraph: Polite close with reference to expected future contact.

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