My work history

Fictional CVs of Arnold Schwarznegger and James Bond

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Write about the jobs you have had: your responsibilities, your achievements and how you felt about them.

Examples and hints

Use an axe-point structure for your argument.

Be sure to include:

Claim (with sub-claims if desired)
- Evidence—two or more of the following:
- anecdote
- analogy/comparison
- example
- expert or eyewitness testimony
- facts, statistics or data
Reasoning—two or more of the following:
- Simple
- Layered
- Add-on
- Counterargument
Conclusion
"So what?"
- Recommendation/suggestion
- Prediction
- Hope
- Implication

Other tips:

Try an alternative structure, stating your evidence and reasoning first, then your claim at the end as your conclusion.
Use advanced grammar.
Add transition phrases.
Include idioms and natural English.

About Me

Business

GBC

Intermediate

Job interview

Work

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