Revision of Sunburn from Wed, 08/05/2015 - 11:35

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Tuesday, August 4, 2015 - 17:21

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Hi,

I'd like you to check these sentences from my journal. Thanks as always for your support!

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My family and I went to the beach on an island in the neighboring city on Sunday. They had canoes for rent there, so I went canoeing with my kids, under the scorching sun. The sun was very strong that day. Even though we had put on a lot of sunscreen beforehand, it turned out that we got pretty sunburned. A few days have passed since then, and my skin still hurts today. It would have been even more terrible if we had totally neglected to wear sunscreen!

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