Revision of Sunburn from Tue, 08/04/2015 - 17:22

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Tuesday, August 4, 2015 - 17:21

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I'd like you to check these sentences from my journal. Thanks as always for your support!

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My family and I went to the beach on an island in the neighboring city last Sunday. I also enjoyed canoeing with my kids, which was rented there, under the scorching sun. It was a day when the sunlight was very strong. Even though we had put on a lot of sunscreen beforehand, it turned out that we got pretty sunburned. A few days have passed since then, and my skin still hurts today. It would have been more terrible if we neglected wearing sunscreen!

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