Revisions for Broccoli

--- Mon, 08/10/2015 - 07:35 by Matthew
+++ Mon, 08/10/2015 - 07:46 by Matthew
 Some mini tomatoes which my husband and I are growing have turned bright red.
 We went to a gardening shop to buy some broccoli seedlings. There are two ways to grow broccoli: sowing it in the spring or autumn. Bugs really like broccoli. If we grow it in the spring, the bugs eat it. It is easier to grow broccoli in autumn than spring. That is the time to plant.
- We planted some nursery plants of a marigold and a peppermint with some broccolis as companion plants in two planters. Companion plants are keeping away from bugs. We planted an herb with a plant of mini tomato. There are no bugs at all. I hope it works on broccolis.
-We are able to harvest about October. We are looking forward to it.
+ We planted some marigold and a peppermint seedlings, with some broccoli as companion plants, in two planters. Companion plants are for keeping away the bugs. We planted an herb with the mini tomato plant. There are no bugs at all. I hope it works on the broccoli.
+We will be able to harvest in about October. We are looking forward to it.

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Some mini tomatoes which my husband and I are growing have turned bright red.

We went to a gardening shop to buy some broccoli seedlings. There are two ways to grow broccoli: sowing it in the spring or autumn. Bugs really like broccoli. If we grow it in the spring, the bugs eat it. It is easier to grow broccoli in autumn than spring. That is the time to plant.

We planted some marigold and a peppermint seedlings, with some broccoli as companion plants, in two planters. Companion plants are for keeping away the bugs. We planted an herb with the mini tomato plant. There are no bugs at all. I hope it works on the broccoli.

We will be able to harvest in about October. We are looking forward to it.

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