ホーム / Eiken test / 添削一覧 / リビジョンを比較 / Eiken test のリビジョン

Eiken test のリビジョン

水, 2015/09/02 - 17:17 - yasuko土, 2015/10/10 - 10:17 - お客様 (未認証ユーザー)
Changes to Writing
-
There is a Eiken Test in Japan. It has 7 grades, and are composed of writing,
+
There is an Eiken Test in Japan. It has 7 grades, and it is composed of three
-
listening and an interview.
+
sections: writing, listening and an interview.
 
 
-
Many years ago, I had taken the test twice. At first I took grade 3, second
+
Many years ago, I took the test twice. First I took grade 3, second I took
-
I took grade pre2. I passed both of them. A few months after the test, I
+
grade pre2. I passed both of them. A few months after the test, I thought I
-
thought I was going to take grade 2, and bought a workbook for the test. But
+
was going to take grade 2, and bought a workbook for the test. But it was too
-
it was too difficult to study to me, so I gave up.
+
difficult for me to study, so I gave up.
 
 
 
In July of this year, my younger granddaughter tried the Eiken grade pre 2.
 
In July of this year, my younger granddaughter tried the Eiken grade pre 2.
 
She had studied very hard and passed. She is a third year middle school
 
She had studied very hard and passed. She is a third year middle school
-
student, and a test-taker. Next year, she has to take a high school entrance
+
student, and she's good at taking tests. Next year, she has to take the high
-
examination. The Eiken certification seems to be a great advantage to her
+
school entrance exam. The Eiken certification seems to be a great advantage
-
examination.
+
for her.
 
 
-
I hope she can pass her examination which she wants to go!
+
I hope she can pass the all the exams she takes, and gets into the school
  +
where she wants to go!
 
 
 
Have a good day,
 
Have a good day,
 
Yasuko
 
Yasuko
Revision of 土, 2015/10/10 - 10:17:
文章 

There is an Eiken Test in Japan. It has 7 grades, and it is composed of three sections: writing, listening and an interview.

Many years ago, I took the test twice. First I took grade 3, second I took grade pre2. I passed both of them. A few months after the test, I thought I was going to take grade 2, and bought a workbook for the test. But it was too difficult for me to study, so I gave up.

In July of this year, my younger granddaughter tried the Eiken grade pre 2. She had studied very hard and passed. She is a third year middle school student, and she's good at taking tests. Next year, she has to take the high school entrance exam. The Eiken certification seems to be a great advantage for her.

I hope she can pass the all the exams she takes, and gets into the school where she wants to go!

Have a good day,
Yasuko

ポリゴとは?

塾講師、学校教師など英語のプロたちから絶大な信頼をうけるネイティブの英語講師陣による、英語校閲&解説サービス。あなたの理解度・満足度が100%になるまでおつきあい! 入会金/会費無・利用時払い可能・1文字USD2¢から・退会自由・プライバシー厳守。英語力UP効果抜群のブログも展開中です。通常12時間以内、最長24時間以内の返信をお約束します。あなたの英語の文章がより洗練され、効率よく勉強できます。

  • 入会金無料
  • プライバシー厳守
  • 利用時払いも可能

書く英語力、鍛えよう