Broccoli のリビジョン

--- 月, 2015/08/10 - 07:47 - Matthew
+++ 水, 2015/08/12 - 18:46 - taichi
 Some mini tomatoes which my husband and I are growing have turned bright red.
 We went to a gardening shop to buy some broccoli seedlings. There are two
 ways to grow broccoli: sowing it in the spring or autumn. Bugs really like
 broccoli. If we grow it in the spring, the bugs eat it. It is easier to grow
 broccoli in autumn. That is the time to plant.
 We planted some marigold and a peppermint seedlings, with some broccoli as
 companion plants, in two planters. Companion plants are for keeping away the
 bugs. We planted an herb with the mini tomato plant. There are no bugs at
 all. I hope it works on the broccoli.
 We will be able to harvest in about October. We are looking forward to it.

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Some mini tomatoes which my husband and I are growing have turned bright red.

We went to a gardening shop to buy some broccoli seedlings. There are two ways to grow broccoli: sowing it in the spring or autumn. Bugs really like broccoli. If we grow it in the spring, the bugs eat it. It is easier to grow broccoli in autumn. That is the time to plant.

We planted some marigold and a peppermint seedlings, with some broccoli as companion plants, in two planters. Companion plants are for keeping away the bugs. We planted an herb with the mini tomato plant. There are no bugs at all. I hope it works on the broccoli.

We will be able to harvest in about October. We are looking forward to it.

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