Our company and the competition

Use an axe-point structure in your answer. 

1. The body is heavy. It's big. It carries a lot of power.
2. The end should come to as narrow a point as possible, for a sharp impact. 

EXAMPLE

Question: "Do you think work-life balance is important?"

Answer:

• Claim: Yes, it's extremely important.
• Evidence (specific, detailed) → Reasoning (layered, add-on):
  • Free time → hobbies, sports, play with kids → creativity → innovation
  • Family time → healthier relationships → children grow into stronger adults → better society in future
  • More sleep → more productive at work → higher business profits → salary increase
• Conclusion: Having a good work-life balance makes workers more productive, creative, and innovative, which is great for business; and stronger families lead to a better future for us all.